Hellooo! This story ist really good. Sorry my English is really bad, so I can't give you a longer review. I hope this story will continue sometimes :3

I like both Sachiko and Shimako in general, but please please please go for Shimako for this story! I feel it's gonna be more interesting that way! Hehe I look forward to it! XD

moreeeee! updateeee!

update!

Oh ho. It suddenly got twice as interesting with Suguru. :D

A nice funny and cute first chapter.

i like this story.. hope u update it..

Yeah your back! Hehehe.. I loved how Eriko saw what a as happen between Sei and Youko. Everyone was obvious. Sei was so cute in being in embarrass. Furthermore I felt sorry for Suguru. If looks can kill, he would of die a long time ago. Is Yuki the one coming in at the end of the ch?
Please continue to update! ;)

Thanks for the update. There seem to be new characters unfolding on the next chapter :) Hope the next one has a Sachiko and Yumi moment.

IMO, there's too much flash back, and redundant adjectives that could be avoided by a more direct story telling and approach. It's a cool concept, but I think you're blazing through this like hot fire on coal. There's no lead up or build up to any emotion or relation, so in the end, there no reward for us. One of the coolest thing about Yumi is the fact that's she just your average girl that's very approachable and honest and I think you had changed a bit too much of her, making her the prefect girl without any fault. In other words, her averageness was her charm. It not your fault, I noticed a lot of stories here that are blazing through the subtly of the show more often then not. In a way it's way out of character, but is not like I can't understand. Another thing is that in Japan, you are not allow to drive, unless you're 18. Sei, got her license after she graduated. Sachiko got hers during the end of her school term. They also required by law to take a seminar on driving.

!AHHHHH! IT'S HEREE! ahaha yeah at least 5x of that happened when I saw the update.. ahaha

Youko and Sei are absolutely adorableee! I just love Sei's reactions throughout the entire thing... and of course the rare, cute (normal teenager-like) side of Youko.. yeah.. I couldn't stop smiling and my cheeks hurt right now... maan, if I were in Eriko's place I wouldn't be able to supress a reaction!

I really liked that Yumi bumped and fell on top of Suguru causing stand-out reactions from Shimako and Sachiko... I was laughing at both of them in my head for being oh so possessive of Yumi.. don't get me wrong, it's adorable..especially the fact that it's directed at someone else which is rare..

I like Suguru in this story... it would be awesome if he plays around some more.. i would really want to know what Shimako and Sachiko would do about it.. haha or better yet, what lengths Suguru would go to just to find out the reason behind their reactions...

I'M SOO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! I DON'T MIND THE WAITING BECAUSE YOU ARE GREAT AT DELIVERING! ahaha Thanks for this! It's a great start for my week.. Love the story and of course, love the author :D Thanks!

someone please update this

UPDATE THIS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE

UPDATE i would have told you earlier but i totally forgot my password to fanfiction yeah the struggle i hope you will update soon so for right now peace.

it was cool write angin soon:)