Reviews for Faulty Wiring
amaskandamirror chapter 1 . 7/5/2019
I can't believe I never left a comment here! This is one of my all time favorite fics, I find myself returning to it over and over again. I love the angst. I love the smut. I love the depiction of Ishida and he just can't think straight when it comes to Kurosaki. Wonderful story! Sorry I didn't comment ages ago!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
the smut. angst and fluff was perfect :)
bandgirlz chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I enjoyed this a lot. Mucho angst rolling off of Ishida, and every bit of it warranted. Exactly the amount of emotion I want in a romance, especially from someone as outwardly cold as him. Really great portrayal. The grammar is strange; you use a broad vocabulary, mostly correctly, but occasionally the word just doesn't fit (there was a glimpse in there that should have been a look, etc.), and often the subject/verb agreement is wrong. Anyway, worth getting a beta over b/c I almost didn't risk reading this and I was definitely distracted, but overall it didn't take away from the intensity of the fic. Keep writing!
Akira Nishikawa chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
*_* so nice you have a very nice way to write and i like it, i enjoy this very much. Thanks!
SomuchSarcasm chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I really enjoyed this :)

I also don't think you need to worry, seems to me you achieved equal parts humour an angst. Good job!

PS. Loved the way you portrayed Ishida. Really awesome!
A.Eelif chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
That was so good! It was depressing in the beginning, but the end was so...awwwww! Great job! Keep up the nice work!
Sindy chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
really nice and complete cannot ask for more thank you so much :D made my day
mangaEATER-chan chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This made my night. Before reading this, I reviewed someone's story (only 4 chapters) and I posted reviews about what mistakes they made. I'm pretty sure my review word count topped their story word count. it took me more than two hours.

I'm so glad I read this because you write so well, you grammar, spelling, punctuation, and smut is like perfect.

There were only about three mistakes that I noticed.

AMAZINGLY well done.

mangaEATER-chan :3

HMU if u need a beta!
yesIamheartless chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Loved it!
Gemini24 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
This is good. :)
Could please you write another angsty IchiUry again in the future?

Keep up the Good work!
and please write more!
jane chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this :) The imagery was amazing and you have a beautiful writing style. The portrayal of the characters was also good - Ichigo being oblivious to the feelings of others, and a more insecure Uryu not wanting to lose what little relationship they had. Thank you for sharing and keep up the great work! :)
Axelkin chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I have to say that this was extremely well done. I have a huge problem with first person view writers but they way you did it was spectacular! If only those who try to do the first person pov would take a note from you. While i will probably still not like fp pov, you did a wonderful job on this fic. It was right in all the perfect places. Keep writing. I enjoyed this greatly.