Reviews for Faulty Wiring |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe I never left a comment here! This is one of my all time favorite fics, I find myself returning to it over and over again. I love the angst. I love the smut. I love the depiction of Ishida and he just can't think straight when it comes to Kurosaki. Wonderful story! Sorry I didn't comment ages ago! |
![]() ![]() the smut. angst and fluff was perfect :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this a lot. Mucho angst rolling off of Ishida, and every bit of it warranted. Exactly the amount of emotion I want in a romance, especially from someone as outwardly cold as him. Really great portrayal. The grammar is strange; you use a broad vocabulary, mostly correctly, but occasionally the word just doesn't fit (there was a glimpse in there that should have been a look, etc.), and often the subject/verb agreement is wrong. Anyway, worth getting a beta over b/c I almost didn't risk reading this and I was definitely distracted, but overall it didn't take away from the intensity of the fic. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *_* so nice you have a very nice way to write and i like it, i enjoy this very much. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this :) I also don't think you need to worry, seems to me you achieved equal parts humour an angst. Good job! PS. Loved the way you portrayed Ishida. Really awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so good! It was depressing in the beginning, but the end was so...awwwww! Great job! Keep up the nice work! |
![]() ![]() really nice and complete cannot ask for more thank you so much :D made my day |
![]() ![]() This made my night. Before reading this, I reviewed someone's story (only 4 chapters) and I posted reviews about what mistakes they made. I'm pretty sure my review word count topped their story word count. it took me more than two hours. I'm so glad I read this because you write so well, you grammar, spelling, punctuation, and smut is like perfect. There were only about three mistakes that I noticed. AMAZINGLY well done. mangaEATER-chan :3 HMU if u need a beta! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() This is good. :) Could please you write another angsty IchiUry again in the future? Keep up the Good work! and please write more! |
![]() ![]() I just wanted to let you know that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this :) The imagery was amazing and you have a beautiful writing style. The portrayal of the characters was also good - Ichigo being oblivious to the feelings of others, and a more insecure Uryu not wanting to lose what little relationship they had. Thank you for sharing and keep up the great work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say that this was extremely well done. I have a huge problem with first person view writers but they way you did it was spectacular! If only those who try to do the first person pov would take a note from you. While i will probably still not like fp pov, you did a wonderful job on this fic. It was right in all the perfect places. Keep writing. I enjoyed this greatly. |