Reviews for Gotham
Spidey-phd chapter 1 . 6/25
I had a friend who was raped. Very traumatic experience. It was one of the life-altering events that everyone seems to expect you to have to just work through once but that was a constant/reoccurring shadow in her life. A few things from talking with her have always stood out to me.

1) She said that she would have willingly had sex with him if he had just asked. He was an associate/friend. He wasn't unattractive. She could never understand why he had attacked, hurt, debased, and humiliated her the way he had.

2) She always felt dirty. She talked about taking long boiling-hot showers, bathing in bleach, scrubbing until her skin was raw and bleeding. But always feeling dirty. She later covered her body with tattoos to remake her skin into something he hadn't touched.

3) She was desperately strong and independent. She paid for herself at restaurants. She was obsessed with consistently working out and learnt martial arts so that she could fight off another attacker. She loved to snuggle and be touched when alert and healthy but couldn't stand to have anyone but her son in her personal space when she was sick, tired or weak.

The Harry in this story reminded me of my friend.
xxxicecreamluvxxx chapter 1 . 6/22/2019
I love how well written this is, and I love how you pieced the story together. Truly, I do.
But I can't help but feel that Bruce is really... dark in this story. How he leaves little to no room for Harry to do as she pleases? How he just upped and removed her from her first job, to essentially blackmailing her into working at WE, and then even withholding her lunch? Like the Dursley's did all those years ago. It was really unsettling for me.
And then forcing her to move in with him, and even moving all her stuff without her approval or even knowledge. It greatly unsettled me.
I don't know if that was what you intended, but it just seemed like Bruce was initiating some sort of abusive relationship of sorts with Harry. I enjoyed your techniques and how you write, but the plot and dialect and such were very unsettling for me.
andjelija.nenic chapter 1 . 6/7/2019
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2019
Please update, I love it
HoneyBear84 chapter 1 . 1/20/2019
How on earth can this be classed as completed, in the end their still not together lol, Loved it, but wish it was longer or had a sequel
Wika0304 chapter 1 . 1/14/2019
please write continuation, it's great beginning
madam lamb chapter 1 . 12/15/2018
take care of her, bruce.
XThe FaerieX chapter 1 . 11/6/2018
how is this complete? I don't mean that in a mean way, I am actually curious.
Dezzi95 chapter 1 . 7/5/2018
I know it says completed, but this could totally be added to! :p
Lucky Lucy Heart chapter 1 . 3/7/2018
PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON!
robinsonjanie307 chapter 1 . 3/5/2018
That was food.
jumpingmanatee chapter 1 . 1/7/2018
This is so great! Will you continue ut, or is there a part two?
rentamiya chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
Woah one of the really good stories i have read
And it's sad that it's only 1 chapter huhuhu
Mitsukini Haninozuka chapter 1 . 7/21/2017
More chapters please?
Lilly chapter 1 . 7/12/2017
Plzzss finish this plzzzz
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