I literally laughed when Bella said Edward wasn't creepy. He is the very definition of creepy

I love how you made them like real people with real problems (financial and medical) great job!

Great story!

I really enjoyed this. A few editing issues but nothing that really took away from the story. I do kinda wish we had seen where the Cullens went, did Edward find a new love, did they ever come back to see the babies or was everyone too worried it might trigger the wolf gene? Things like that. But I love happy endings! I have all your fics on my to be read list but I’m on a Paul/Bella kick right now so I’ll have to come back to them. I’ve seen a few are incomplete and I hope that one day you finish them so I can read those too. I just don’t read incomplete fics anymore. Maybe one day you’ll write another Paul/Bella, though I see you prefer Jake/Bella since most of your stories are those two. I’ve fairly recently discovered my love of Bella with the pack and I look forward to reading the rest of your works.

Whew, how complicated. I mean, what would phasing do to a baby? And I figured that she might end up pregnant. Just because she’s phasing doesn’t mean it wasn’t a possibility and they weren’t being careful simply because some old men said she couldn’t get pregnant due to the phasing? Lol. Men only think they know everything. ;)

Renee is Renee. It’s hard to hate her but also hard not to be annoyed with her.

I like his name. It suits a little boy that comes from Bella and Paul. That wasn’t an easy labor? First ones are always the longest. Fifteen hours is nothing compared to some. I know someone who was in labor for 36.

Congrats to Sue and Charlie but I know it can’t be easy on Sue, knowing she’s coming between two best friends—even if it isn’t her fault, or theirs really. Hopefully Jake will get Billy to see reason. Charlie will be devastated if he loses Billy too

This was nice of him, helping the ladies set up a surprise for Bella like that. He’s such a sweet guy, it’s a shame that he lets his darker emotions take over sometimes. But I know how that goes myself so...

I’m glad he’s learning. They both have to learn to talk and let go of some things. But then again, that’s what marriage is about.

Oh yeah he does. I mean, I get it. I have a tendency to push people away and deal with shit on my own too, because it’s what I’m used to, but for days? His dad is on my shit list, Tom failed him so many times and this was the one time he could have done something to fix things and he just let Paul hide.

I think, for me, Charlie and Renee need to stop putting their last mistakes into Bella. She is nothing like them. I mean, personality wise she’s a bit like Charlie but she’s far more mature than either of them were at that age. Sure, her mom doesn’t know why she and Paul will always be together but Charlie does. And frankly, I think the two of them are more ready for this than they think they are. I hate the stigma people have that pregnancy is the end of all their hopes and dreams because it isn’t. With a good support system you can still do the things you hoped for. Bella can still finish school, she can still go on to her master’s too. They just have to budget not only their money but their time. I feel they can do this.

Happy birthday indeed. Lol

So now Charlie knows about the pack and vampires. They have to be careful, he’s not truly protected by the pack like Bella is. The Volturi could get to him if they found out. It’s hard to take care of someone sick when all they’d rather do is not cooperate. Did she truly accidentally take too many, or was she trying to end it on her terms?

Well who knew virginal Jacob could go like that? Lmao. Maybe I missed it somewhere but, how is it that she can’t get pregnant? I am glad to see that Sean won’t be phasing. That was an interesting twist on the gene.