That was beautiful, I cried.

that was good and deep and just so yay! Sad but then they are reunited and thats sweet but poor MayBelle.

Very, very, very beautiful

This is beautiful yet so sad. Where's the tissues when ya need on?! You have written a masterpiece for the rulers of Terabithia and it's truly a jewel among riches. Thank you for writing this and posting it.

I cried. This was beautiful.

i loved it! :)

that was very beautiful I myself even cried I love this story

Absolutely fantastic :) added to my favourites, I loved it!

This is such a great story. It's just shy of two thousand words, so it's not too long, yet it's not too short either. I also find that I like how you've managed to take such a tragic, established story and managed to expand on it, giving us the quasi-happy ending so many fans of Bridge to Terabithia have wanted. That you've managed to grow up Jesse's little sister while retaining the childhood innocence that made her character who she is only serves to better the story.

In the end, great job, and keep up the excellent work.

Awwwwww, I can just imagine it! :)

Its sweet and sad. its nice

Awww... Maybelle is awesome. I love what she said about Jess, it was good.

wow this is so cute i wish there were more stories for jesse and leslie like this they make a wonderful couple i wish this is how bridge to terabithia really ended

I really like this story. Bridge to Terabithia is one of my favorites and this fanfic gives me the happy ending I always imagine when I read the book. Thanks