lol s very happy smiling from ear to ear videl smirking at her boyfriend gohan it's about time you said that you love me

lol satan and son videl hissing saying to her boyfriend and husband sayianman you do realised that i have adopted your ditching class i mean when i would go fight clime i will be back in class in a few mins

Videl to gohan so sayianman where am I going to sleep I hópe in your bed

0.0 *.* 0.0 SO COOL!

I really liked that little story and I think you could probally do a great little sequel. Anyway keep up the great writing!

Cute story!

very good gotta do more like this

O.O u shud continue this fic instead of just ending it. PLZ!

please contine story (pleading with puppy dogeyes)

it's relly good so far.

THEY DIDN'T KISS!O_o HOW CAN THEY NOT KISS!

THAT IS SO UNFAIR...

uuuh...Sorry. I just would have liked it more if they had kised _''''

oh well.

I still liked it though!

Very kawaii and so realistic.

Good job, and keep writin other fics_

dear Sarah,

that was beautifully written, most G/V fics i read r so unrealistic, as if all it is is "i luv u, u luv me, now the story's over" but u made it make sense and even though it was short i enjoyed reading it, plus i luv songfics. i've never heard the song u used but it worked perfectly w/the story. keep writing, u've got real talent.

just a simple reader,

amanda

Hey! i liked that! It was good and lyrics matched well. Gohan and Videl fic! Kawaii! _~

I think you should make 2 chappies where they tell their parents.

That story was good and cute.