You shouldonly write what happens in the show DON'T write what you want

Love it! There's something about the relationship between Hal and maggie that I can never get bored of!

Love what you have done with the story...so perfect. Can not wait for next chapter

No no no! Don't pause! Make up what you think will happen with Hal, that'll help us get through the long eight months!

Please keep going with this - i mean, take your time etc., but don't give up! I love it! And we need something to get us through to S3! I cannot take the wait any longer and its been less than a week!

I don't want to pressure you into updating this but it would be such a shame to just leave it until the show airs again! This could go in so many different directions! Maggie could take a side adventure and kill Karen to avenge Hal! Or you could write about Hal's implant and Maggie's reaction to it, it doesn't need to follow the shows! That's the point its fan FICTION! So it's not real :-) I mean neither is the show.. But hopefully you get my point! I really hope you continue! You could start a new fic that follows the shows if you really want to! This is too good of writing and too good of a plot to just drop off here though! Plus I need something with Hal and maggie in it to keep me occupied until 2013 and I love this fic! So happy when I saw you updated! Please keep it up

We've only just had Molon Labe in the UK, so i've been careful about reading fics - but I LOVE THIS! I love Hal and Maggie :)

Love it! They are brilliant together, they test each other but at the same time wouldn't be without the other. Can't wait for the next chapter

I have to say, I'm a sucker for Hal/Maggie fics, and this is one of the better ones. Both Hal and Maggie are in character, and your added in bits really add to the story and are well written. I look forward to more )
Borderline Sociopath, AKA: Nessa, xoxox
PS: I hope your hand feels better, and wish you a speedy recovery.

I love this chapter! its so sweet great job. I also imagined Maggie saying "shoot some skitters for me" lol ;P

It's so Cute 3
Please continue.
Sorry about your finger :(

I was wrong she changed her mind very fast on the show. Great chapter, I cant wait for the next.

Yay! Thanks for continuing, I'm really enjoying having Hal/Maggie stories to read.

'And now he had Maggie. Forever.' I liked that line a lot. I mean it is very meaningful. though it has only 6 words so much of deep meaning. I really hope Maggie / Hal characters will be in the series until end. I mean every two chaps they kill some of the characters.

I loved the chap.:)

SO CUTE!

awwww! i wouldnt be surprised if hearts lit up in my eyes as I read this. sorry about your finger :P
ps did anyone else totally cry at the end of the newest episode? there were tears in my eyes...