Reviews for Legend |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your characterization of Peeta in this! I agree that Peeta's very cunning, and (can be) a leader, and I love that you made him all that and more in this! I think it's really interesting that you tied it up with Peeta (and his son) being gifted. I really enjoyed reading this! I could have done without the Delly narrative though actually... but I see how it fits. It was also heavy on intimacy which I was not expecting! The Epilogue seemed slightly dis-jointed from the other 13 chapters, but it IS an Epilogue so I suppose it could be anything! Thank you for writing and sharing! This story is a gem. Legend Peeta! |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful! (the three finger salute at the end) Wonderful tie in with the first lesson, "not terrible" AND! you even tied in the "magic" reference! ... which made me realize I must review this chapter. That was masterfully woven |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see Finnick- I feel joy, please don’t take that away from me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS fanfiction should be turned into a movie with Kaya Scodelario and Alex Pettyfer playing the leads This sheer excellence in terms of writing and characters is something I can only imagine attaining in my dreams. IF those shitty 50 shades can turn into movies , Why not this one ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write beautifully and with such charming descriptors. They really brought the scenes and characters to life. I loved it! This is the first story of yours I’ve read and I am a fan. I am. I am. :) Can’t wait to jump into the next one. Thanks for writing! Be well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story a lot like the dystopian story The last she I read half on Wattpad. Katniss is Ara, Peeta is Kaden and Gale is Gabriel. I could not finish it due to the inconsistencies in its narration and millions of grammatical errors. YOUR ONE IS LIGHT YEARS BETTER THAN LAST SHE YOUR WRITTING IS SO GOOD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story. Thanks for sharing it. Very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well robin was supossed to be a noble who got his lands usurped while he was away at the crusades |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your writing style, really good Story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() No Katniss! Tell them the truth! Love it but I'm dieing inside |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh this is cool... |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a beautiful fic! Loved the twist of Peeta being the skilled one with a bow. Thank you so much for sharing! |
![]() ![]() awesome story, brilliantly written i love your stories. keep writing more! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am in love with your style of writing. |