Not much to say about these chapters that I didn't say in my original reviews, but it was fun to reread them and enjoy the well-paced plot, the lively characterizations, and the swashbuckling action all over again. Also, while this fic never had any serious issues, it is still appreciated to see you fixed most of the minor problems with it.

Still, I did notice a few more minor problems. Not sure if these are part of the revision or if I just missed them the first time:
1."and they seemed to be hiding something." This is too vague; showing rather than telling would work well here.
sometimes refer to Dark Dragon as "the Dark Dragon", a la RotDD. I have no problem with your using the article, but you should be consistent, instead of using it half the time and not using it the other half.
typos: "and impaled the sword.", "but it's beauty", "the brown hair boy", "as the ebony bladed thrust towards him."

As before, the villains are good and menacing, the relationship between Max and Ian is lighthearted and entertaining, and "Nate"'s being disguised is intriguing. This is one adventure fic that balances the action with the personal stuff very well.

You're still nowhere near caught up with where the fic was at when you discontinued it, and it's now been a while since your last update... I hope you aren't planning on leaving us hanging here! (By the way, if you check the traffic stats, I'm sure you'll find I'm just one of several people reading this fic. Most fanfic readers do not review.)