That was so funny and so cute! I love the part where Butch came back five minutes later all beaten up and said that he hated them, but didn't leave! XD Great story! I enjoyed it very much!

It's so presh:3
Loved it favortive couple!

I really love this story! Is so cute how time passes between them but it still comes back to that one season I'm sure we all love and enjoy...
Summer.
Anyway I love it and the way you put those words and their definition, very educational and it centralized the theme of each memory...awesome job!

What a pleasant story :) You wrote Brick nicely; I liked his attitude during the whole entire thing. Good luck with the contest!

Flying upwards for now,
D.o.C.9

Okay, so I meant to review this a while ago.
I don't think there's an adjective to describe this story. I think I just may be in love with you.
I love the little definitions before each segment. I also feel you capture Brick's personality so well.
The whole fic is just ... amazing.
Marry me.

.o.
Wow.
ADORABLE!

wow really love it hope you keep it up

i love it

I really liked how you showcased snippets of their relationship. It's a cute idea and I think you did it well. The little definitions at the start of each segment were a nice touch. I also like how you used the summer season to kind of link the whole story together. You put effort into your organization, and it shows! Also, I love the length- more than 4,000 words!

So great job! Thank you for taking the time to enter, and good luck in the contest! :)

So sweet. My favorite part is when Boomer explains to Brick that he has a crush on Blossom. I read that part twice because I liked it so much. You should definately write more PPG fiction. Good luck with the contest. :)

Awwww! That was so sweet! :3
First of all, I loved how you started the story at even before Brick was born. As the events flow, I adored how you could see the evolution in Brick's feelings and how he grew more aware and emotionally intelligent. It was awesome to see the Boys grow like that ;P Okay so, there were a few spelling mistakes/typos here and there, but for your first published work, I think it's great :) I also admire the originality of your story. As you probably have noticed, there aren't a lot of original fics out there, so it's a breath of fresh air :P The whole concept was so creative, it was really impressive :)

Sorry for the long review, but I believe that you should have some motivation, especially since this is your first :)

Keep it up! And good luck for the contest :)

awesome story! looks like i got some competition here...hehe yeah, i joined too. a lot of people did, actually. i honestly think you deserve more reviews. :3
i'm not trying to sound arrogant, but i'd appreciate it very much if you read my story ("Hot Summer Love Story") and reviewed. if you do...thanks! :D
and yes...it was VERY cute. x3
plus i think you portrayed brick very well. the hot-headed, sensible, smart-as* leader boy... ;)
so they were created during the summer, huh?
hmm, brick, calm down. she's powerful, but she's using her power to help the helpless...how do i say this? it probes she's strog in a more mental way-she dares to die (not saying she will) just for the "helpless"!
and you were destroyed in the summer...heh. looks like "seductive" girls scare you. ;D
and recreated in the summer too...ahh mam, him...but he does have a great taste in hairstyles, i guess. ;)
go back to fight the girls...hmm...you guys had a lot of fun with that one!
until, of course, shrinking in embarrassment happened...and yeah, it was literally.
haha and later on he became good because of a blond? i must admit, i though it was bubbles at first...oops!
but nope, it was boomer.
wow, boomer, the supposedly "dimwit" just made sense...hehe, looks like he's smarter than you give him credit for. ;D
brick agrees...personally, that's smart. idk...maye it's 'cause i want you and the puffs together, or i just think you'd be great good guys. no wait...it's both. ;)
ah butch disagrees...
he goes to fight...
and gets beat up.
he says he hates them, but brick's right. he doesn't actually.
and i'm guessing he'll be a good guy now? *raises eyebrow*
and yeah, you still get to beat stuff up when you're a good guy. so it's still action-filled...and you can actually WIN. XD
and then brick learns blossom's real name...WHEN HE WAS ELEVEN! *shakes head* brick... *sighs*
haha awkward moment after a few words... (reds seem to have that a lot, huh?) ;)
then when robin (wearing a lot of elephant things? cute) calls to her...
THAT'S when he learns her real name...and brick, if you knew buttercup and bubbles' names, don't ou think blossom would have a name like theirs, instead of the ones you came up with?
but yeah, you're still smart. :3
HAHAHA YOU DEVELOPED A CRUSH ON HER! when you were twelve... ;3
butch was even crazier? so brick goes to boomer...
AND HAHAHA BRICK LEARNS WHAT HE WANTS TO DO WITH HER! XD
and haha boomer once again proves to be smart. :3
boomer leaves him to think...
and he accepts the fact. awww... :3
so his feelings grew as he got older? aww...
first kiss? at age fourteen? ohh, with blossom...
he's buying bread for butch to tease birds with? yeah, kinda is a waste of bread...
lol he tries to get past blossom when he notices her but she notices him too...
they talk a bit...
haha brick, you're stumbling over your words. :3
then something pushes him into blossom? aww, he's kissing her and she's kissing back. x3
so he asks if she wants to go somewhere...
and she interrupts him, saying yes...
haha yeah, she does sound a bit needy... ;)
so boomer set this up? aww yeah. :3
brick then says they should be working on the chemistry between themselves...you showed them, huh? ;3
lol he was interrupted by his daughter.
but all the good things happened to him in the summer, huh? ;)
yeah, "goodnight" does sound like a great bedtime story. :D
bianca, their daughter, she seems cool. XD
and blossom's happy...
and he calls her pinky again...for old times' sake, no? :3
blossom says not again...
but apparently, yes again. x3
welp, this was a great story and i'm sure you'll be a great author-you just need to post some more fics up! (*人*)d
but in the meantime, i'd love it if you read my contest entry and left a review. thanks! m(_ _)m

Oh. Just so one of the red-est stories I ever read. Its so going to be one of my newest favs. Oh my gosh... I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Please right more red stories. Your really good at it.

I Loved this pure perfectio. I now think I love summer little bit too.

*cries* Favorite story... Did you read my song-fic for the Reds?