Oh he is such a soft soul
Thank you

Loved this story! I like how you've captured both characters in their BDSM roles and in their 'normal' roles and took the time to mesh them together.
At first I thought Bella pushing Edwards Dom side would be too much for him but I'm glad they compromised and found the perfect balance.
So glad you have a sequel to this. So interested in their development.

Great story. Love, loved it! The fact that they were exhibitionists in the club, then completely normal in the outside world led to my continued interest in how Edward and Bella would manage to make their relationship work.

I hope the sequel picks up right from where this one left off. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next!

At this point I’m quite convinced I could get my wife to read this and do all of these things. Maybe your words would be an excellent introduction to both FanFiction and BDSM etiquette? Sigh. Maybe... heehee

I enjoyed this story. I am glad that you decided on a sequel, I wasn't ready for it to be over.

I love that even though he's a dom you've given him such a sensitive and vulnerable side. Most stories don't have that

j'ai adoré! j'ai hâte de lire la suite

What a great story. I'm off to read the sequel.

Dang! I really wanted to see Edward's reaction to Bella's performance.

Gah I loved this story, very very excited to read the sequel!

It's embarrassing that he calls her pet. I know that's a thing in the bdsm bullshit but it's fucking embarrassing that grown ass adults get turned on by calling someone, pet. My dog is my pet, doesn't mean I want to Fuck him. Whack ass mother fuckers.

this was both sexy and adorable-a tough mix to get right!

got to love Dolores!

You’ve outdone yourself! This was absolutely magnificent and extremely tasteful. LOVED IT

WOW Just WOW you have a gift with words