| Reviews for The Night Parade |
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  Guest chapter 33 . 5/31 I disagree, it should have a proper ending, every story should. |
| Guest chapter 33 . 5/31 willing to turn against him so willingly - willing to turn against him so easily |
| Guest chapter 31 . 5/31 they'd connect - they'd connected it's purpose - its purpose |
| Guest chapter 31 . 5/31 He hoped he'd help her - He hoped he'd helped her |
| Guest chapter 31 . 5/31 we're apart of it - we are a part of it |
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/31 irregardless - regardless |
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/31 you or your friend, Karen attempting anything - you or your friend, Karen attempt anything |
| typo chapter 29 . 5/31 But it was a nice, Diana - But it was a nice kiss, Diana |
| Guest chapter 28 . 5/31 Your welcome - You're welcome |
| Guest chapter 27 . 5/31 the ultimate price - the ultimate prize Didn't make much sense otherwise. |
| Guest chapter 27 . 5/31 Generals' miles away - Generals miles away |
| grammar chapter 26 . 5/31 to carrying - to carry |
| mangled bits chapter 26 . 5/31 taking through them - taking from them Finding someone of similar building - Finding someone of a similar build |
| Guest chapter 26 . 5/31 to closer - to close |
| Guest chapter 25 . 5/31 different turn then he expected - different turn than he expected |
