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This is the best one I've read so far in this fandom, nicely written and funny. Thank you.

OH MY! I love Inuyasha's attitude :) the whole thing was great!

Funny story..:P:);):):)

NOT BAD PERTTY GOOD

I'd say that's one of the better lemons, because of InuYasha's comment about the pups. For round 2 I suggest Kagome shows him, how the modern world prevents women on the fastest way from getting pregnant.
And your style of writing...never thought I could be turned on by good grammar!-)

Very entertaining. Great idea having it from Inuyashas point of view, including what he was thinking. I think that was very accurate compared to the show and manga.

I loved it keep it up!
His point of view was cute.

Woo! Hot. I liked that very much.

nice. hell, y not? u should do Kagome's POV. i'd read it.

wow!

bahaha love this

i loved it. i would be very happy if you wrote it from kagome's pov.

very naughty

THIS OH SO BADLY REMINDS ME OF ME AND MY BOYFRIEND. Lol, this was a very interesting lemon for these two. I'm like .. faning myself. I really enjoyed reading this in InuYasha's POV. Please do Kagomes too! :)