a really intereating story. would love to see radcliffe get his comeuppance

Oh, this was splendid! Just yummy! I read it four times back to back because I have a "pash" for Bodie, too! However, I also adore Doyle and can't imagine hurting him, what a creep! But if I ever met Bodie, I'd faint dead away, and they'd both be thinking "what a loony woman!" I expect at this point there will be no encore appearance of the reprehensible Radcliff, but it would be so delightful to see more of Bodie through his eyes sighhhhhh.

schöne Geschichte, und endlich auch mal kein Happy End.

I really enjoyed your story and would love to see a 'follow up'
Radcliffe is creepy and should get the 'treatment' he deserves and a bit more between Bodie and Mary would be nice as well.