oh my god i cried! and i laughed! this was just so inspiring i really felt like i was there in the room. i really liked the wind metaphor at the end it was so powerful really got my heartstrings.

when he touched his thigh god himself was excited 3

AWWWWWW i love larry stylinson3 so cute!

Omigod, YES! Once I saw some videos of One Direction and I saw how close Louis and Harry always sat I'm just like "Someone HAS to write a fanfiction about them!"
I'm glad you did!
There are mistakes though and if you were to read your fic over, you would catch them.

Is there going to be more? I love this.