Good afternoon,"Author-sama". This reading that you've written is lively to say the least. its really rare to see fan fics with this kind of quality and i felt almost every emotion like i was there.(or maybe thats just me?).Anyway, I was really surprised when i found my self actually wanting to Ram my fist into Sting's Face thousands of times. No matter what anybody else says, i think you've written a masterpiece.
Thanks for writing this.(and reading my failed attempt at a review i wrote in 30seconds)
with regards
Ace of the 7th House of Silvers.

Look forward to it

Awwww

Stings such a jerk

Poor lu

So mean with ur words Lucy

I like the idea your going for but sting and rogue don't become prominent figures until after the grand magic games and by the time the grand magic games arc. is over they've all become friends so they would probably not kidnap lucy and/or threaten to kill her

It was good u know I'm never gonna have a baby who wants a fat tummy and feel like ur gonna die il just adopt. Thanks very much ️
I like it how there wasn't any innapropriate bits bye

I know your probably not gonna read this but if you make a story again don't keep repeating things it doesn't make the story good

Stupid Sting and his Stupid Voice

Oh hell no!

Stupid Rogue and his stupid laugh

I love this story and the one before it!

You could have made it rated m. But nope your didnt. Well anyways I loved it. Can you please make anot her version of this and make it sexier. But it has to be natsuxlucy

umm i notice a bit off inconsistency... if from the old book lucy was branded by natsu with that thing that lets him know where she is all the time why couldnt he find her when she was kidnapped?