I love your fan fictions they are awesome make more (:

Good job for a first time keep up the good
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The end? Well, at least it was a happy ending. I love happy endings. Gonna do a sequel to this? Considering the ending, you definitely could.

Right more this is so good and it makes me feel good

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that was the greatest fanfic ever…..of all time. that should be made into a 3 part video!

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Hahaha that was funny exspecialy the ending... You should keep going! Don't leave so many of us Daniel/Larmina fans hanging!

Lol man awesome love story gory but great

well that is more of an inforcment of copyright law I think video game gides wount be affected since that can be classified as a instrutinal video and some u tube videos that are part of officeol channles. so I am actule ok with that part. youtube videos not coverd by copy right like fan mad stuff would still be fine. I am mosty playing devils avacit here. hope you post an actual chapter soon becose you can get intruble for posting stuff like this instead of chapters and that is coverd by the first amendment of the us constituton were is located. this is also why they can moderat the site as they do.

Color me not surprised at Lance's reaction, but then again, if he didn't react that way, why, he wouldn't be Lance.

Gotta love the animal references. Glad Daniel played it safe.

LOL BUSTED! This your first fanfic? Keep on writing.

Please make chapter 4

There gose the pizza lol. Is allora and keith pissed the cidets used up there whiped cream . Lol.