Very good story, I hope to see a follow on to it

You have an good story here. Any story Shaw dies in good. However you have been hanging on this cliff for long enough. Also Sarah and chuck frozen in time staring at each other must be kind of tough. However with the state of Sarah's dress I guess Chuck has been able to bare it. Anyway please come back to this it could be an enjoyable story for Sarah to join the team.

Interesting story. The Shaw fight was pretty good. Maybe you can continue someday.

is there a sequel to this? alot of questions yet to be answered, like is sarah on a mission or is she really a stripper? just seems like such a weird place to stop this

So is there a sequel... or something?

This is a darker story than I usually like (with Ellie, Devon and Clara deaths and Sarah leaving with Shaw) but I really liked it. I could hear Tom Selleck's voice when reading Newtons lines. There is a lot of of material left to use for a sequel. I personally think that hunting for the killers with Sarah would be a good story. Or tell it from Sarah's POV. Maybe her story would be even darker (like she fell apart after learning about Ellie and really is a stripper). I am a glass half full kind of guy, so maybe the Woodcombes are really alive and being held for some reason (Witness protection?). All in all good story! Please revisit this AU! Don't make me beg, because I will if I have to, lol!

Thanks for sharing. You can't just stop there! Sequel, sequel, sequel, he chants loudly!

Dont end it!

It's nice that Chuck's dad is still around now that Ellie is gone.

It's always a good day when Shaw dies. Interesting revelation that Sarah left him. You didn't give us Chuck's reaction to that news, other than his comment to Shaw, which was probably just to instigate him to do something rash.

What? Sarah's a stripper? On a mission or...?

Well it looks like you got rid of Shaw in the most warm of fashions. Should we call this chapter"Skinny dipping with Shaw."

Finally, the wheel turns full circle, what can you say at this point though? Should be interesting with what you come up with next. Will look forward to your next update with real interest.

I loved this chapter. You must continue with a Sequel now that Chuck and Sarah have reunited. please continue.

Cliffhanger? Not good... But great action :)

Hey I remember this now... Good chapter, more please.

Interesting Chapter. I loved how Chuck found out what the Ares Key does. I loved the plan to do a double cross on the ring operative. Please continue.

Okay, now wait a minute. In CH 1 you said Chuck had the Intersect removed for good. Then in CH2 it appeared that he had some serious skills and I wondered about how. Now you say his Intersect kicked in and he translated the Japanese. I'm confused. Did I miss something?

Anyway, the threat of the Ares Key is very disconcerting and will these thugs will prove to be quite a challenge for this new team. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Thanks for sharing.