Reviews for Saturday |
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Chocolate devil chapter 36 . 11/21/2018 I. Am. Dying. I have read many stories and fan fictions, and when I’m looking for a specific pairing, I don’t usually go for fanfics that switch between pairings because they annoy me at how they go about it. It’s never a full explanation of all the relationships going on. But you have somehow managed to not only almost flawlessly make all the relationships fully develop while sticking with some things from the original show, but you’ve also hit many different problems and such along with it. Don’t even get me started on the writing style and word choice. Or how the dialogue actually sounds like real life banter. I love this story more that I’ve loved most stories in my years on this website. So I thank you for your talent and this amazing piece of work. |
Invit chapter 36 . 11/11/2018 Well, that was a masterpiece ! Ever thought about changing the names and publishing the story as a "real" book ? I'm sure it would be a hit ! I really loved everything about the story from how you polished and developed the characters to the way the story evolved. I hope to have the chance to read such quality content again ! Please don't stop what you're doing, because I truly feel like you have a wonderful future ahead of you :) |
TaKari025 chapter 10 . 6/23/2018 Instead of sea arrows wouldn’t it be harpoon because rocket x Kaldur’ahm is torpedo which is a water rocket and a harpoon is an arrow that you shoot through the water. Just food for thought |
Ademonmeetsanangel chapter 8 . 4/26/2018 The feels! AlsoWally felt betrayed?! Freaking WALLY! Sorry I'm just very very invested in this story:P |
imjustshippingmywaythrulife chapter 32 . 11/5/2017 So, um, I'm a little confused. Is Dick the same age as Bart? Or like one year older? Because in the story, Dick is thirteen and Wally is three years older than Bart, which would make him 12 years old. Not a flame, just wondering. Besides that, I love this concept. This is one of my favorite stories. |
imjustshippingmywaythrulife chapter 33 . 11/2/2017 Definitely loved this chapter! I'll most surely be checking out your other stories! 3 |
VeronicaChase chapter 9 . 7/6/2017 I'm just glad Wally and Dick are together again XD |
VeronicaChase chapter 8 . 7/6/2017 Omfg I really wanna wring Wally's neck rn |
VeronicaChase chapter 7 . 7/6/2017 Wally NOOOOOO |
Scarletbat chapter 36 . 6/25/2017 SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL BLUEPULSE BLUEPULSE BLUEPULSE BLUEPULSE BLUEPULSE |
Supergirl chapter 35 . 4/30/2017 Who are Alice and Emily? |
YoungJustice101 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 Poor poor Dick |
Anon chapter 36 . 2/17/2017 THIS WAS GREAT! It displays such a powerful message about insecurities and bullying and so on. I loved it along with the fact that it was so long. I love longer fanfics over the shorter ones cause you can enjoy it more. Thank you and I hope you keep writing things as powerful as this :D |
Russia'spanda chapter 36 . 1/22/2017 This is amazing. |
Guest chapter 36 . 12/13/2016 that last line tho, loved it. it was a bit overwhelming at times with all the POVs and everything going on, but i loved the end chapters :) All the lovely ships made me so happy! |