It's not crappy, it's really cute and warm and fluffy! I love it!

Awww... I love it. Charles loved Anna from the moment he started to get to know her and this just shows more of what he was willing to do for her. I love it!

On a serious note I noticed a very minor typo where you put "bur" when I'm sure you meant "but" other than that and the fact that I wish it was longer this is great _

Yeah, you've got a couple of typos, but the basic story and point of view is good. Keep writing

Yes, it is really hard to write fanfiction, but I appreciate and enjoyed your effort!

Thanks for writing this! I'm so glad there is some A&O fanfic to fill the time between the books! Keep writing, I'll be reading xxxxxxxx!

hey you did well, you did have a few spelling errors other than that it was enjoyable.