Reviews for 1593 Days
Unknown One chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Cute although the starting was kinda confusing for me. Their relationship's cute. Loved the part where Amu asks Ikuto his name as she didn't actually it. X3

It was a wonderful story! :)
lovelaughlive4268 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
That was AMAZING!XD
Your Hopeless Romanticist chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Gasp! Why the hell am I just reading this spectacular work of literature now? Oh, I don't know - forgive me, great one!

Okay, enough with my foolishness, and I do sincerely apologize for if you found the written display rather odd, annoying, or anything that pops into your mind. You probably don't want to know why I even bothered to do that, but I'll tell you anyways. ;p It seems I'm still fond of an animated show I was watching earlier. ("Ouarn High School Host Club" and I'm guessing you know which character influenced my unusual behavior - which is Tamaki if you didn't know.)

Eh, enough about that rant; sorry if you don't want to read about it, but I felt like writing a lot for this review.

Anyways, I really, really enjoyed your piece of literature. Your grammar is impeccable, and your writing is undeniably mesmerizing. So much mesmerizing that I envy your way of writing. Ahhhhhh, I love this one-shot so much! I hope you write more Amuto stories because I would happily read them without any hesitation.

Despite the fact that there were a few grammatical errors (which is nothing to fret over since it's mostly bond to happen one way or another), I love, love, love this!

It was refreshing to read about Amu leaving Ikuto instead of the other way because of how often that happens in the fandom. So what if Ikuto leaves to find his father in the manga? Big whoop. Haha, just kidding.

Though, I did find this to sound rather be cliché when I first read the synopsis, but boy you proved me wrong. Which I'm glad you did, because if I just continued on scrolling down - then I've never would've experienced such an amazing read.

["Actually… what is your first name?" She asked him with a nervous giggle, biting her lip in confusion. "I never actually knew it." Ikuto felt both amused and annoyed.] That was basically my favorite paragraph because of how cute and funny it was of Amu. It also seemed so in-character for me, because I doubt Amu would bother to listen to something during school assemblies. But it also seems OOC for her because, of course, she would've known his first name since they dated. Sigh, oh what an irresponsible girlfriend you are, Amu.

Anyways, terribly sorry for such a lazy-ass review, but it's 3:08 A.M. and I'm very tired at the moment. Plus, I'm using my iPod - which bonds to happen a lot when I review, but whatever - and I also put blame into the iPod excuse if there are any typos, or grammatical errors due to the annoying auto-correct.

Hope to read more from you soon!

With lots of love,

Colly
Sir Rigby chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
aaaah, cute 3 keep writing
FluffyHamster chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
*sniff* THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! *sob*
Amutonessx3 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
I love this!
Mirene the Mermaid chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
This. Was. So. CUUUUUUTE :DDDD

I loved this. This is like, my favorite oneshot as of right now.

Mirene
Neko-meme chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
I am speechless.

This was so adorable and mature that you left my speechless but I really did want to praise you for this. I love how he kept count of every day.

It honestly was too cute to not review .

I've actually never read your stories before, but if you're saying this is not your best piece then I honestly cannot wait to read your other stories. (I've rambled - . -)

Neko-Meme
nalizamutoforever chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
ME GUSTA.
Innocent Flames chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Awwww! Oh my god! That was so cute! Cheeseballs or whatever that was one amazing story! Hope you make more! w
XeMi-ChIx chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Aww it was a very very very extremely cuteeeeeeee one-shot. I enjoyed every moment of reading it. Thanks for writing it! Job well done!
gnaegnjekqnb chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww rhat was beautiful

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