Reviews for Chill |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, babies are so funny sometimes, the random stuff that captivates them. Completely intriguing to watch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww it was a girl! Yay :) awesome edition |
![]() ![]() Absolutely adore this series of stories! :) I was wondering if you're ever going to do a one shot or something of Al calling Rick "dad" for the first time? I think that'd be a sweet scene, would love to read how you picture it happening. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was adorable. Love how you made Castle cautious because Harper was his first baby to handle. Al was so sweet trying to calm Harper. Then the end, when Kate closed the fridge, was perfect because Castle definitely started something by standing in front of the fridge with Harper. Jessie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too cute! It was all great, but the end was the best part. Just read all of your stories in the coffee shop series...so well-written and they just grab you by the heart strings and you can't stop reading...haha. Would love to read more companion pieces in the future :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ADORABLE |
![]() ![]() Hee, this is adorable! I really enjoyed it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Al is alive YAY! the story is great I hope you continue writing things in this universe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooh, her name is Harper! And she loves the fridge hahahaha Love it. And love it how Al came and calmed her. So adorable. So so adorable. I love this coffee shop universe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was very sweet. We got to look at Rick for the first time taking care of a newborn. Surprised that they had a girl but not at the name. Good job with that because of the meaning behind it. I enjoyed seeing Harper like the fridge light and how it calmed her down. Plus it was nice to see Al be so good with her sister here. I thought you did a wonderful job with the little explanation about how Al was when Harper came and the talk that her parents had about their attention being on Harper. Loved the part where Al, Rick and Harper were on the sofa and eventually fell asleep there for Kate to find them. The ending was great and I liked how Rick tried to warn Kate about the fridge until it was too late. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harper - awesome name! So lovely to see Al alive, lol; and the new addition to the family sounds pretty awesome, too ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is just too adorable for words. :D xo, Anna. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha love the last two lines. Anyway whole thing is gorgeous loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is too cute! I love family time, and Harper sounds like such a cutie, and Al makes an amazing older sister! Love this so much :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1st, the name harper is soooo cute and an adorable reference too. 2nd, I love the adorable family vibes. 3rd, you're brilliant. |