I like the interaction you write between Tony and EJ here. From the way she treated him on the show, I think she really did have this sort of casual view of their relationship.

I enjoyed this A LOT :D

Ooh. I like this. Very in character for EJ, especially when you discuss EJ's uninterest in post-coital interaction.

Well done.

This is really sad :(

And yet, something I can see happening. I think you did a good job capturing EJ's personality.

And the last line ... so sad!

-Sophie