I really like the pace at which this story is going. Some people drag it on for so long and then skip a lot, but you made them see almost all important parts with a good amount of story to each! Love it, cant wait for more!

Dude, u havent updated in seven years, or did ujust finish it?

Just a suggestion, you’re rushing. It’s ok to take your time and explain the scene in more detail. Nothing too extreme, but the way your writing is leaving a lot out. Other then that it’s very good! Sorry if I came across as rude ️ -B

please continue

if only this wasn't updated in late 2013 but in 2017 or 2018, i would love to look forward to the next chapters. I would die to know sanji's reaction of luffy landing and staying in amazon lily and meeting the kuja pirates. other than that, i really want to know the ending of this fic, how their bonds of friendship strengthened.

is this dead?
do message me if this is updated, if not well... rip to your idea story

I WANT MMMMOOOOOAAAAARRRRRR

Plz do another chapter it was so good

please Pleaseee PLEASEEEEE CONTINUEEEEE! IT'S VERY GOOD!

I like your story! Update soon!

Interesting story, will you update it? :)

Will this be updated soon?

OMG PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU FINISH THIS FIC!

Love it

Are you going to do more its good