Man that was great but sad, I'm once a happy boy until I read this, my life's a lie.

Great. You shattered my soul. :'(

man... why are those peter pan OS always so sad! I mean they are great but I dont want to have tears in my eyes all the time :'(

YUP, just cried :)

“All children, except one, grow up.”
you gave justice to Peter. Good job!

Interesting take, could have lead to the start of return to never land XD. Cute Fic

Cool. Excellent. Neato _

AMAZING. I'm doing something like this. :D

This story was good, but it could have been better.

Your grammar needs a lot of work. You should proofread it more carefully, or, if you can't, get a beta reader who can. It'll make your story ten times better.

Otherwise, the story is great. I love the idea of Wendy keeping a diary, and of Peter finding it. It's cute! Good job.

I loved this! This was wonderfully written and makes one think allright. I remember all those nights staying awake looking for peter pan and Tink. I really like the idea and it was deffenatly worth the read.