I like your writing style, it's pretty unique. The only problem I can see, no offense, is that it's like you write Nero and Dante as normal teens, then out of no where throw in they're half devils, something that's apparently ignored by everything in the story, like a Devil Bringer is as common as freckles. This is in a lot of your stories. I truly don't mean this as an insult at all, just something you could improve on. ;)

Now that was intense. Delicious. But intense. I loved it, very, very much! )
cheers!

omg i love this version of nero and dante is so sweet

Such a sweet story with a sweet happy ending... well, somewhat. But I'm sure they will be happy if they have eachother...

Take care and good luck!