It’s a great story

like it

good

great start

At first I was very excited with the idea of Duo showing and surprising the SEEDverse, showing them what a true gundam pilot was made of. Then as the chapters continued I just felt dissapointed and honestly irritated at how you avoid good moments where Duo and Deathscythe could shine brightly, providing an action filled scene which would be very enjoyable. That and also the lack of details. Now you let "fucking" (excuse my language) Kira take Wing Zero? to me that is a taboo. Compared to Heero who shows complete control, Kira is a maelstrom of emotions putting him inside Wing Zero? Well I am sure you know what'll happen. Don't even try to explain him being a coordinator, because he is not above the likes of Zechs and Heero, therefore there is no way for him to be able to handle the zero system. I surely hope Heero shoots or gives him a beating.

I am going to freaking kill you... Heero death glare

I like this story. Even through I never watched Gundam Wing or Seed!

Bah you killing me here! Loved how heero saves duo at the last second! How did the other pilots think of duo's combat performance?! Are you going to continue this fanfic?! Your killing me here meanie!

Question. if Duo is a completely different universe, where Une DOESN'T exist, shouldn't the guy he showed her letter to question who the heck is this Lady Une is, or call his bosses to go look her up? He just let a complete stranger with whats probably a forged letter from a made up admiral have full access to the robots. I mean even whatever government stamp or seal that is on that letter that would make it be seen as government approved and official looking probably doesn't even exist in this world either. *lol*

You're actually comparing SEED to the ZERO System? Ooh boy.
They're nothing alike, dude. And don't believe what's written in the wiki about the SEED factor. That's nothing but fan theory and as old as when Kira was stated to know "Coordinator martial arts" in his wiki page.

Yes, that "Coordinator Martial arts" was written by some unknown Kira fanboy during the mid 2000's(The wiki's, especially Wikipedia[where it all started] were all pretty lax back then). I can still remember it very clearly since the claim was ridiculous, and I was 11 at the time.-_-

Honestly, it used to be much worse, it was once stated in the wiki that when you awaken SEED, your mental processing is comparable to that of a Supercomputer, and that's not the worst part, the wiki once portrayed SEED users as some untouchable beasts that can see in slow motion. It's funny what fanboys can think up. Good times. _

But if you believe that what was written in the wiki's true, then feel free to cite your proof, specifically an "official" source of the Seed factor would be nice. Either way, it's your fic. The only official things we've heard about SEED is when that Ericawhatshername theorized that it's some kind of evolution and when Fukuda said that it's a "physical representation of surpassing one's limits".

If you want to know anything official about the Zero system, then google "Gundam Wing Mechanics Questions" and when you enter the site, go to page 5.

can you update please!?

Deathscythe is 2 meters smaller than Strike.

yes we love you. please more.

finally

so on my cell the review box... is not actually blue... and you wonder why i say write faster... CAUSE YOU KEEP LEAVIN' FLIPPIN' CLIFF HANGERS! WRITEFASTERDWELLEROFTHEBASEM ENT!