Wow, beautiful story, beautifully written

Very, very clever, incredibly well-written. Thanks.

OMG this was just ... PERFECT. FLAWLESS. STUNNING. BREATHTAKING.
Deamus are my all-time favorite pairing and I'm pretty, pretty sure that they get married. I mean, J. K. didn't reveal their future wife's, did she? And so that is the only thing I can accept.
So THANK YOU, THANK YOU for doing this! I loved it so much.
I loved it so much I nearly cried. THANK YOU.

That was... that almost made me cry. It was beautiful. Really, truly beautiful.

I seriously think that I have read this 10 times in the last twenty minutes. This is absolutely beautiful and you have just fuelled my Deamus love.

This is just so ridiculously perfect that it made me want to cry, just the progression of them from best friends to something more is absolutely perfect. I love the way that Seamus finds the sketchbook and it was absolutely beautiful and oh-my the underlying, constant theme of drawing and art was just phenomenal.

Oh my, please never stop writing! :)

Aww, they are so perfect together. great fic i loved it! :D

This is the first Seamus/Dean fic I've ever read - I never considered them a couple till now. The way you've written their relationship is so poetic and sweet. I loved how you progressed the story from "friends" to "lovers".

I think this may be my favorite Deamus fic. Thanks so much for writing it (:

omg that's adorable. I love the unique person it's written in - I think this might be one of the few stories I've ever read that's in second-person. It's refreshing.

Rhi

Oh gosh. This is beautiful. You are amazing. Wow.

That was beautiful! Your wording is just simply breath-taking, like it was done by a professional! I loved it :)

This is beautiful. And gorgeous and amazing and so so so perfect. And so them. And must have somehow escaped my notice before, because I was just scrolling through stories I'd already read when I saw this and I'm so glad I did. The perfect tension, the sketching, and Dean's secret notebook and that last picture Ohh! It's a perfect way for them to reveal their feelings, because there are so many with just one being brave and saying I love you and the other being like oh I love you too yay. Not that that isn't good, just perhaps overdone. And so I'm glad you didn't do it. And then the continuation, down the road... ;) And oh oh oh oh oh. So sweet. Love it. Thank you.
DeandSeamus

That was great, poor Seamus. I don't like the new commenting thing up here.

I absolutely adored this. It's short and sweet, your writing style is lovely here, and this whole story is just perfect. I agree that second person has the potential to be done terribly and become annoying, but that you pulled it off excellently. Likewise with the very "thinky" stories that don't have much action - I do love them when done well, probably more so than any other kind of story in fact, but there is real potential to make for a disastrous story. But really, this was just perfect. Especially as I've always had a soft spot for Seamus, haha. Instant favourite! :)

I liked this a lot they are so cute together. Random but Shay and I have the same last name :)