It's a great story but i wish I'd known you were rewriting it before reading the 10 chapters. You should warn us in the description.

we are in the same boat just in my case I replace every chapter for a new versión. I will read it your story

Ah no fair leaving it like that! I liked it!

hope you continue this. it's been awhile.

I think they should find out about Chris soon besides it looks like Piper already have some idea on Chris's identity

Really good effort but watch out for missing words.

Looks good I like it. I love both Chris and Charmed and have written several stories about them. I'd love your opinion

love this story I really hope the girls and leo FIGURE OUT who chris is

Awesome fanfiction. :)

Need more

well done, I'm glad that Piper was the one to get him to calm down. I think they need to soon...

Another good chapter.

I see you haven't taken what I said in my earlier review.

1. You need to make the chapters longer.
2. Don't put your paragraphs together in a big block.
3. Space out your work.
4. Use proper grammar.
5. Be a bit more descriptive in your chapters. what the characters are doing, where they are etc.

I like this story - don't get me wrong but after reading some of the chapters you seem to need a bit of help.

This was a very very short review...
And a very touchy one! Piper is awesome!
Thank you for updating!
Please update soon!

Nice way of getting Chris calm. I don't think vue seen that anywhere else. Yes, they should definitely find out.

UP DATE UP DATE BTW I'm going to keep chanting like this until you UP DATE UP DATE...