I know this story hasn't been updated in almost 4 years, but I really hope that you'll finish this at some point. The plot is so intriguing, and the scenes where Akihiko and Misaki interact are so tense and yet so in-character. Of course, I want them to fall in love and everything, but I'm also really curious about the background story. With Tokyo being divided and everything, there's bound to be drama at some point.
Thank you for writing~

kyaaaa. so adorable

Love this! Continuation, please?

I know this story is really old but could you please update for me, i will be your best friend!

This is realllllly good! I don't think your sentences are bad at all. I read this whole thing in one day, and I can't believe how good of a writer you are. It's not "choppy and disorganized" at all.

I really like that we are getting to see Misaki opening up to Usagisan. It's so cute, and it's also cute to get to see their reactions to eachother.

This chapter was kind of sad but a great chapter no less. When reading this chapter I kind of feel a bit of pain in my heart ! Also, don't worry about your sentences being choppy or disorganised :) it's fine the way it is!

I hope you update really soon!

I thought scootched was a word. If I wasn't so lazy I would look it up. Looking forward to the "happier" you promised.

This was really cute that Misaki was opening up. Update soon!

This chapter was sad... :( But I still Loved it! More development in their love! Yey!

Update SOON

Plz update soon! !

Ooooh my goooosh!
Those two are sooooo cayoooooot!
Can't wait for the next installment!(:

MORE! :D

This was great! I loved the whole scene, and when he was in the alley, I half expected the guys to come back and try to beat up Misaki again, but Akihiko comes in at the last minute to save him and keep him safe! I loved it, and the ending scene was so cutee! I cannot wait for the next chapter! please update soon!

Nice chapter. Update soon please.

Update soon please. D:

I smell trouble for a very naïve Misaki so I can't wait to read what happens next!

P.S. Don't worry so much about your writing style, I don't find it choppy or awkward at all. Quite the contrary, I find that it flows nicely and is very easy to picture and follow. COUGHcouldusemoresmutthoughC OUGH

Ahem.

Just... update soon okay? Pretty please?

-Peanut