omg this is so emotional! I'm crying and everything! Clive is a bit weirdly unstable...but it just makes him more adorable! (i think) It's such a good fanfic-can't wait to see wot happens next!

This is awesome! It's really dramatic and fits so perfectly with the plot of the Unwound future. You're a really good writer, put another chapter soon!

I'm positively devouring this, just wow.

Clive's behaviour is quite erratic, isn't it? Does he have a disorder or something?

Anyways, waiting your next chapter!

Sophia

This is really good! Please keep writing! Next chapter soon!

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Wow.

I would give you a full-fledged review if I felt up to it, which I don't, but I promise to dear hell that you will get one eventually.

Just...the synonym use could be chastised, but it's so suitable, for the man, for the universe.

You've strived to keep Claire and Dimitri in character, and I applaud you, as that is very difficult.

It's an interesting perspective too. I don't recall anyone ever writing about Dimitri's ten years gone.

And I'm glad that Clive is arrogant and young and slightly unhinged; he may very well have been sore over the loss of his parents, but going so far as to plan for ten years and trying to destroy London and lives in revenge shows that he is not right in the head. That, and I'm not a fangirl of his.

I really want to hear more, I devoured that chapter.

10/10

Sophia

This is pretty awesome. I love that it's from Dimitri's view. I like how you portray him. I really like it, and I really love your writing style. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read on!