Reviews for Devotion
ushmie chapter 3 . 3/17
Oh my GOD, I told myself at the very start, NOT to begin reading this, it’s not complete and never will be and I KNEW I’d be frustrated but OF COURSE I have zero self control and finished it in about five seconds and now I NEED more. First of all, you did an excellent job of hiding everyone’s identity up until the point you wanted to reveal them to us. I loved flipping the switch between Sango/Kagome and Sango/Miroku, and my FAV moment was the brief encounter between Miroku and Inuyasha. Oh why oh why did I start this... I need more... I really do.
demonspawn666 chapter 3 . 4/14/2005
Wow, seems interesting! You are on eo f my favorite authors, but I'd never seen you currently writing a story! I was so happy! Because the stories I've read, you have either stopped writing or have completed...

Please finish this fic! You are really good at endings and I would hate for you to stop writing this fic! Oh yes, this story was very interesting. I now see where everyone goes, at first I thought Kagome was Sango before you actually put any names down...but then I figured it out!

Good job, can't wait for the next chappy!
AubreyWitch chapter 3 . 3/28/2005
Interesting story line. :) I love the japanese culture within this story.
Mossy Tea chapter 3 . 10/18/2004
Wow! Fun!

And really interesting... women samurai- I didn't think that would have been allowed.

Please send me the link: midnightwht

The first three chapters are sounding really good!
dEeYaN chapter 2 . 2/9/2004
whoa... So is the Hime Kagome? I kept on thinking that it was Sango... I dunno... Is she? Is the guy she's going to marry, the womanizer one, that should be Miroku, right?
Anyways, do continue!
Angel-wing2 chapter 2 . 3/9/2003
_ You updated this! Nice, nice! Is it Sango? Hope it is. Update soon.)
Pogo chapter 2 . 1/17/2003
Where's the rest? .o
jenna chapter 2 . 10/29/2002
you really should update this! its cool!
Rosalind chapter 2 . 10/27/2002
Hello. i read this story ages ago, i can't remember how long but that doesn't matter much cause i have trouble remembering what year it is. anyhoo i found it again today, i haven't forgotten it and i'm really sad that you haven't continued it. what makes it so memorable for me (an extraordinary accomplishment my dear) is that unlike many other princess stories kagome isn't a brat, spoiled yes but not a brat and you haven't 'westernized' anything short of writing in japanese. also inuyasha's character is lovely too, he acts just as he should in his role but his original character shows through, no oocness there despite what other people may have said in the reviews (i don't know yet, i haven't read them). the only suggestions i can make is please continue because it really is quite special in comparison and to perhaps fill it out with more descriptions of the background, just little touches like descriptions of a painted fan or lanterns or gardens. i'm not asking for you to change your style, another thing about your writing i admire, but just to add a touch more colour to make a pretty fic - beautiful. if your stuck for ideas to do that then maybe you could watch crouching tiger, hidden dragon. i adore that film. well that's all i've got to rant about. please feel free to email me back and tell me where to go, hell or down the back of the couch, where ever you feel appropriate. smiles an lollipops for u )
Mynuet chapter 2 . 10/9/2002
Nifty! I'm guessing Kagome is the hime? Is Inuyasha still a hanyou, or is this human IY?
sunling chapter 2 . 7/17/2002
Wa-hey! You updated! Sorry for my lateness again... I'm really starting to like this story, too. So Inuyasha is, um, Sango's guardian? Or is it Kagome after all... I found a few hints pointing towards that as well. I hope we see this mystery solved soon, so keep writing!
Clymene chapter 2 . 6/30/2002
Interesting! Now that everything is set up, I'm eager to see the plot finally kick in. And why am I suspicious of the daimyo's son... Hee!
Yayoi chapter 2 . 6/29/2002
Heey! It's an update! And I must say I'm now confused...I was thinking the Hime was (hope hope hope) Sango, but that whole "charm" thing doesn't really sound like her. It sounds more like Kagome, but then again, not really...;;; Kagome's charm seems to be for Inu Yasha only.; I really like your fics-your language is so simple, but you make us see what the story is saying. (Did that make any sense?) I'm trying to say your imagery is very well-done._

And I must say I'm hoping for more "Beloved." I don't know, it sounds really intriguing to me. I hope you don't stop it...
Ki chapter 1 . 6/17/2002
Good premise. I'm intrigued... but, could you finish Dokyusei first before starting on this story? Please? I really like Dokyusei alot!_;
sunling chapter 1 . 6/8/2002
Wa-hey! I don't understand how anyone could *hate* this fic, honestly. It's interesting to see this plotline done with (I'm throwing a wild guess) Sango and Miroku instead of with Kagome and Inuyasha, for whom it has been used n1 times...

And I see that the break has, if anything, just honed your writing skills. You have this vivid, vivacious flair to your language that leaves me breathless at times. _ But do continue! This is scarcely more than a teaser, in any case...

Aino
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