this is so cute, I can definitely see this happening in a real episode

Good story! You probably know of the grammatical issues from other reviewers, so I won't say anything about that. Other than the issues, great story!

Lisa eating Cous Cous? Nice.

Continue please!

I love this! Update, please!

This is really cute. You probably won't update it, but it still works well as a one-shot. Lisa's last words to Milhouse set up everything to come.

I know I'm reviewing late, but I must say, this is a very interesting story! It is very descriptive and you nailed all of the personalities and conversations good! But like Narfy once said, my only critique is a few grammatical errors. But this story's good enough that I'm mostly ignoring it. Come on, update the story ASAP! Pretty please?

Hmmm, this is a very interesting idea and you did a pretty good job describing things especially at the beginning with the conversation between Nelson and Lisa. I can actually see Nelson cheering along with the other guys in the pub.

The only problem I have is that there are a few gramatical errors in here. Mainly past and present tense, a few words are missing in some sentences, and some things are misspelled. But still its not so horrible that it keeps me from reading it. So I would suggest that when writing the next chapter to go back and check your mistakes. Just so the story will flow better.

I would like to see more to this so keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

Wow...just wow