This was really good, I think there needs to be a side story to this showing Inuyasha and Kagome getting close and getting together, just a small suggestion.

Man I miss seeing your work on regular stories, there hasn't been any that isn't about New Years in quite some time, don't get me wrong they're good but I miss the other type of stories you used to do.

Well let's hope those kinds of stories will make a comeback soon, till a possible next time.

I thought the idea for this story was amazing. A Beauty and the Beast theme with two fighting brothers is wonderful! Your exploration of Rin's intellect was also great.

If you ever think about tightening this up, I'd love to see more Kagome/Inuyasha (I'm such an InuKag junkie).

Going for George R.R. Martin style intimate 3rd person chapters would mean getting to flesh out even more what is a wonderfully cute story arc!

Always a fav!

This chapter was gorgeous!

I love this story update on this story please. Plus can you
please let Inuyasha and Kagome get married and have pup or pups please and let Inuyasha be faithful and happy with Kagome please. Same goes for Sesshomaru and Rin let them get married and have pup or pups and let Sesshomaru be faithful and happy with Rin please.

Aww this was very cute, and I agree, working with friends can be really stressful!

Question: do you hate Kagome or something? Because it certainly feels like it from what I’m reading. I know Kagome is far from perfect and isn’t the main character here, but she is also far from the useless, idiotic brat who doesn’t know when to shut up and WORK that I seem to be reading here. Perhaps my interpretation is simply different. I suppose what I’m really asking for is a bit more depth to the characters

Omg this was adorable xD I loved it, contrary to others belief I actually found kagome and Inuyashas relationship to be funny and sweet and accurate in terms of banter etc and if I were in the presence of his elder demon brother I'd stutter even more than Rin, it was adorable and I loved it, thank you xxx

Technically, they should be fired for lack of professionalism. You either put up pr shut up...Kagome is so damn annoying as usual. Lol...I guess no one was physically attracted which is unheard of especially concerning Sesshomaru...thats blasphemy lol

This is one of the most beautiful fanfics I've read. I smiled through every single chapter and I'm not exaggerating. It will remain as one of my favorites, I guarantee!

Cute. Good story.

Awww how adorable

Kag is a little self centered...and selfish...does she not care about their reputation?

*sobs while holding tub of ice cream* IM GOING TO DIE ALONE!

I love rereading stories lol