So bittersweet. I expect nothing less though

Whoa. Amazing job on this one-shot.

How sad that Neville couldn't stay long enough for Alice to find her way back. But maybe it is for the best. It is amazing to see that scene from her perspective.

Wow. This was beautiful!

This was awesome. Very sweet. XOXO - EEKtheCAT

This is wonderful and heartbreaking all at the same time. How terrible for the dragon to guard her memories like that, in so much pain.

Oh my god. I love this so much. It made me cry /3

really sweet story:)

God that was beautiful. And truly heartbreaking. It pulled a tear from me.

Your writing style flows wonderfully, lilting and painful. Honestly, I kept rereading lines like "Sleep comes soft and dreamless, and she feels no difference" because they were just so well crafted. You've captured the tumult of disconnected thoughts and half-memories and feelings jumbled inside of Alice's head with great skill. Just awesome.

This was so beautifully written, I love how you described Alice's thoughts

I loved this story. :) You're a good writer.

This is really good! I like the way you write Alice's thought process as she is insane, and I love the moment you created when she sees her son. Beautiful story.

This is beautiful. I love the thought that Alice has small thoughts underneath her blankness, and especially that she responds to Neville. I think motherly instincts really are that great, so it's very good.

You are an amazing writer. I enjoyed how it was from the perspective of Alice and I like how you kept mentioning the "dragon." You are brilliant at conveying emotions. (This is also sort of a general review because I felt like it would be weird to leave a review on every single one of your stories- not to mention that it would quickly get repetitive. I really like how you play around with mental/physical disability in a lot of your stories. That isn't the most common subject in fanfiction, but there was a war, and so one of the characters really could have had that happen to them.)

This was amazlingly written. I like the way it was from Alice's POV.