Why is he apologizing while sexually harassing her?

I really like Bolin's painful uncertainty. Gosh. the pain. And a disconnected timeline just WORKS, somehow.

are you going to continue this?

really wonderful.

I can't remember if I've reviewed this already but anywho
Korra and Bolin are SO in character it's ridic.
And this line:
"I'm not that kind of girl." She rounds on him, feeling the need to defend herself.

"Never thought you were." He says and her fire dies before it ever really got started.

I LOVE that line. It keeps echoing in my head, dude.

I love the idea of Bolin and Korra together

Your story is entertaining and I enjoy the limes and lemons. Keep it coming!

Oh my heart. I love how you wrote the both of them. Korra was a lovely balance of her usual dominate self and that a bit of vulnerability that makes her so wonderfully human.

I love how the chapters aren't in order so the reader is left piecing things together. You do this well and it really works. I can tell you know how all the pieces fit beforehand. There is no inconsistency. Good work. I hope to read more of this in the future.

i love borra so much and this just makes me sooo happy. thank you soo much for this. seriously. xD

I don't even have words for how great this is. You have a gift.

And we all do LOVE Bolin eyebrow waggles, don't we. Le sigh. You make me want a Bolin for my very own.

Just wow. Just wonderfully wow. I'm so glad to finally see someone do this pairing justice. Good work.

these are beautiful, I hope you continue

So did I have to read this backwards? Because I don't know why, it just seems way out of order... Sorry to have bothered you :)

oh man i hope you post more :3