me gusto mucho la historia

I love the Tsuna Kyouya friendship concept. Nice job

Aww so sweet and cute :3

linda historia :D

That is nice and cute oneshot :)

I like how in this story, eight-year-old Hibari isn't the dangerous prefect that will bite you to death like how I see in other fanfics. I always find it interesting to see in fanfics that young Tsuna is not afraid of Hibari, but when they grow up, Tsuna has a rational fear of him.

I wonder where Namimori High is? They never really showed it. Wow, I wonder who beat Hibari? And Tsuna came to the rescue! Did Hibird lead Tsuna to Hibari because that bird is so useful.

Tsuna is waiting outside the lines for Hibari, and Hibari is also waiting outside the lines for Tsuna as his Cloud Guardian. How sweet. I can see their friendship develop, and the meaning of Tsuna's words was finally revealed since I also didn't know what it meant.

This is really cute! I'm excited to read more of your stuff now!

It was very sweet...

The idea of Kyouya and Tsuna as childhood friends is very intriguing. I might do one myself. :D

oooowwww so sweet

ahaha! Waiting outside the lines... mm! That's interesting! Although I think you might've been in a rush and missed this one:

Even if everyone else rejects him, he'll be THE ONE WAITING for him outside the circle of rejection and into his welcoming arms.

that's it for me!

ciao ciaoo

This story is so cute! I loved reading about how their friendship grew and developed .