| Reviews for Desperation |
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  Guest chapter 5 . 11/15/2016 Again, nice plot line and ideas, but still a bit OOC, and youmissed a few opportunities to write some descriptions of emotions, which can oftenhelp your story take off. Still a little rushed as well. - primitiveLOGIC |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/15/2016 Kind of OOC and rushed, but otherwise, a lot of potential. |
| Anon chapter 6 . 1/8/2016 Interesting so far, Moriarty's so evil in this! |
 MyGuiltiestPleasure chapter 7 . 6/9/2015 I think I asked this before - because I know I've read this story at least once before, "Please come back to this story and complete it. Sherlock and his friends can't stay in such a desire state with Moriarty controlling and winning 'The Great Gam,'. |
| flowerhippie1234 chapter 8 . 7/25/2014 OH MY GLOB PLEASE UPDATE! |
| flowerhippie1234 chapter 3 . 7/25/2014 I KNEW ANDERSON WAS GOING TO DIE! |
| Do you want to know who I am chapter 8 . 5/20/2014 Please continue! So good story! I'm glad Moriarty just lied about killing Mrs Hudson |
| llThatOneGirll chapter 8 . 12/31/2013 Omgomgomfg...this is intense... |
| PhoenixFireWings chapter 8 . 11/10/2013 OMG the suspense in this story is amazing I cannot wait for more updates |
| jipseebree chapter 8 . 8/15/2013 Please don't tell me you gave up on the story! I love it! I want to see what happens, I'm one of your 149 followersleasue update it for all of us. |
| Petrichor503 chapter 8 . 7/23/2013 This is soo great please don't stop there I need to know what happens |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/28/2013 OMG. You HAVE to write more... |
| Saavikam69 chapter 5 . 6/26/2013 Ah the torture if it all! |
| Anonymoustache chapter 8 . 6/25/2013 Ahhhhhh! please please please please please please please please continue this! It's soooooooo good and I just have to find out what happens! |
| Anonymoustache chapter 1 . 6/25/2013 Ooooooooo! Chills up and down the spine! Good plotline, good writing! |
