| Reviews for In their sleep |
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   Eddie1398 chapter 1 . 2/29/2016 how cute! |
| rocknroll419 chapter 1 . 7/16/2015 THOUGH SHORT THAT WAS AWESOME! Because im also a fan of this pairing! Nice work!:) |
| The seventh cat chapter 1 . 5/16/2015 Heart-warmingly funny and sweet. Good style, apt ending. I like the way the actual revelation is only mentioned. Continue writing fanfics. |
| dracot chapter 1 . 8/18/2014 Muy graciosa y muy buena |
| LillyStoppable chapter 1 . 3/20/2014 Awwwwwwww! Soooo sweet! Hugs! |
| Silvereye-BW chapter 1 . 1/28/2014 This is just the cutiest one-shit EVER! |
| Lilly chapter 1 . 8/31/2013 you should make this a two shot and have Shaggy's pov of Velma's sleep-talking; it was really good |
| Katyuana chapter 1 . 7/18/2013 Awwww. A bit sudden with Velma waking up. I would've preferred seeing Shaggy's perspective of Velma talking in her sleep. |
| accioacamp chapter 1 . 7/15/2013 This is so absolutely adorably cute! Love it! "'Elementary, dear Velma', said Fred not taking his eyes off the road. 'You've spilled the beans in your sleep." I love it! :) |
| GryffindorSpark chapter 1 . 5/2/2013 Haha! I love it! Although, I wish you had included the part when she spilled the beans in your story, it was amazing! Keep up the good work! ;) |
| Goggled-eyed Pegasus chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 lol :) i like it you should contuinie |
| LeeOfHermes0330 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013 So amazing! I looooove Shelma, they're so cute! |
| Creepy-Pasta chapter 1 . 2/4/2013 Lol I never really got into Scooby Doo, but thanks to this fanfic I'm starting to love it again! X3 So cute and funny. KAWAII ! |
| LittleMissPanda84 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013 Oh my lord, this was so cute! xD It really reminds me of something my best friend would do. (You can actually have a conversation with her while she's sleeping.) :P Fred's "Elementary, dear Velma" was so perfect. I was laughing so hard and I could practically hear him saying it. lol. |
| Critic Number 5 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012 You were off to a wonderful start and then you crashed... I lost all interest after Velma wanted to stretch her legs. It was unexpected that she revealed her feelings in her sleep (very nice) but the idea of sleep-talking doesn't bode well with me. It is a rarity among people over the age of 10. I like your attempt at humor in the next to last sentence. |
