I really like the coloured thread idea. It even seems like something that could have appeared in the show (and it would have been the best thing there). Everyone seems to be in character, can't wait to read more.

... Now for the mail order brownie! :D

I think you should publish something. The abusive father thing for Serenity is overdone by other writers, but you did it so well that it really made an amazing story. I love how Kaiba carefully calculated every move he made. Let me know when you do another silentshipping story! I don't always have time to browse the newly updated stuff.

Aww! Their first kiss was so awesome!

Those parades sounds like fun! When my Navy sweetheart gets leave, all we do is hike and try to find a nice, quiet place. The trouble is knowing when we'll both be in the same town at the same time! I got to see him last month, though so yay!

I like how Set is taking a strong role in this. All of this was very delightful to read. Yay for mac n cheese!

This chapter started off really sweet and then got wild. I loved it!

I remember Sarah! This story is just amazing!

Wow! This just keeps getting better an better. Even though someone dies in pretty much every chapter, you pull if off so well and differently each time.

Kaiba actually asking Joey for advice? That was kinda creepy. I didn't think that day would ever come.

Yeah, and killing characters can be fun, especially if you get to do it over and over again. I try to kill my characters only once, though.

Oh no! Not another suitcase! Definitely a cliffie. Good think I started reading this after you already had the next chapter up :)

I liked the stuff with Joey! That was great.

Yes, this is very interesting! I love the way this is going, and I only wish I had more time to read!

Yay! brownies! I like this so far. It is mysterious, yet also well-written so that I know just enough, and want to know more.

Uggggh this is so late, and I apologize, but this was amazing.

Not the best (since The World Over still holds that title), but I loved everything about it.

Hooray for happiness! :)

waahhh thank god that man is dead! gosh kaiba and joey are really good actors! hmm seems like this is a new beginning! the romance will commence wink wink :)

shocks sere suffered too much! i hope from now on kaiba will be there for her!