Could you please not curse? The shut up stuff is fine but just not the legit swear words.
a. it doesn't feel like something the characters would think or say
b. it just doesn't settle right with me lol
c. Brandon Mull wouldn't curse (he is a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints and they/we are commanded by God not to swear) (sorry if that made you feel bad at all. other than that, I absolutely LOVE THIS! please continue!

I made a comment a little earlier but I got it wrong lol. Kendra and Seth's mom's name is Marla. Not Maria of Martha. Sorry about that!

In the very beginning when you are introducing all the people present, you introduce Kendra and Seth's parents as Scott and Martha however, their names are actually Scott and Maria. I am a huge Fablehaven fan and this was so fun to read. You actually inspired me to write my own Fablehaven Reads Fablehaven. Thank you so much for writing this, it brightened my day :)

Really interesting idea, however, tanugatoa is normally called tanu.

I love it! please do more on this!

This is really good. I do wish that you would write more/faster, but I can't really complain. I write pretty slow! I kind of wish that you would skip to book five (although I want all the rest of the books too) because when Kendra meets Bracken - bam! That's gonna be HILARIOUS! And when Seth makes that comment about Kendra showing him up by killing Gorgrog; that'll be funny, as well. ...so, can you pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseee write more. Please? Thx !

This is so awesome! I love this story and I cannot wait for the next parts to come out! Keep up the good work! :D

Please more! I'll die if you stop it is so good!

I really liked it! Good job! Are you going to finish?

OMG! PLEASE CONTINUE! I love this.

If things are awkward between Brackendra NOW, I can't wait for Gavin to pop in!

Thank you for writing this, it's a great idea, but could you please not swear? You can do things like "shut up" and stuff, but please not, like, serious cussing. Thank you!

I did it!

I'm just feeling sorry for Bracken when Gavin appears...

If it helps, you can go on , go to get the books, find the right book, click Barnes&Nobles, click sample, and it has the whole book. The only exceptions are the extra books (The Caretaker's Guide and The Book of Imagination.)