Reviews for I Swear
Randomfanfics131 chapter 1 . 4/6
I'M DYING! This is so well-written, but the line that truly got me was when Optimus face-palmed. I have no idea why, but it did. And Sideswipe telling Optimus he was pregnant was SO WELL WRITTEN AGHHHHHHHH
Ripplingstorm chapter 1 . 6/11/2017
Amazing. Absolutely amazing. I love the premise of the story! I've read this one several times, but it just never gets old.
Alter Ego AV chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
Why is someone's swear jar so funny? Also, I can hear nothing but Jeffery Combs in my head when Ratchet went on his tirade at the end.
"... you can go f*** yourselves to oblivion. I say what I want in my own f***ing repair bay." God dammit, Ratchet! You swear the most, so you donate the most Shanix, buddy!
Triscribe chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
I can't stop laughing over the final tallies and the reactions-! This is fraggin' brilliant! XD
Alana-kittychan chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
Haha gosh you people in the USA sure as heck get you knickers in a twist over swearing like really dam as a bad word really? I mean here in Australia Fuck shit crap asshole are some of the really bad ones you should not shout in public but you can shout out bloodily heck where the devil have ya been mate that rotten bugger been at it again and not have too many upset at you
Rosabel Moonstar chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
this was so funny. i couldn't stop laughing.
BookLovingPersonR.B.L chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
OMG! RATCHET!
Pjlover666 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
LOL hahaha XD Oh god! LOVELY 3 LOVE IT!
DarkShell chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Oh my gosh, this got me rolling on the floor laughing! XD XD XD My neighbours are probably like 'what da hell?' right now, it's too much to hope that nobody really heard that. At least there was no one home but me... :D
Loved the Jazz-Prowl scenes, and the Ironhide-Chromia scene, and and the Ratchet scene... oh my gosh, 9000 dollars! You might as well tell him to shut up for good.
To put it shortly, this one's going to my favorites.
As for your question about what is considered the perfect story length... I guess that's individual. I'm a very fast reader, so I enjoy long oneshots (such as this one) or multy-chapter stories with medium chapter lenght (by medium I mean somewhere between 2500-5000 words, more than that becomes tiring).
But drabbles can be fresh, too - after all, if you've already said what needs saying, it's a bad idea to fill a story with empty words just because someone says they like longer stories. It's all about the effect you're aiming for.
Hope that little rant was somehow useful... Keep up the good work! :)
Autobotgirl2234 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Great story.
Autobot Slipstream chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
My god that was hysterical!
RagdolDark chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Man, I laughed so hard at the totals of each Autobot xD
SusantheRedhead chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Love the story! Hilarious! !
icesong180 chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
OMG, im laughing so hard. i spent like 10 minutes staring at Ratchet's total and lmfao, this is hilarious. :D Im just going to go back and read this so many times in the future. And im going to crack up ever single time. XD
CelticViking chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Aaah the swear jar...my current nemesis at school...frag it! ;-)
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