Reviews for a king without a castle
cshen chapter 1 . 11/3/2018
Devious but brilliant. The fastest way to get a woman and keep her to your side by will. Treat her like a queen forever.
jessnicole chapter 1 . 10/30/2018
so awesome
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2018
Awesome writing! I hope you write more Klaroline fics.
thegirlwhoflies chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
Sequel please :) That was beautiful and promising, very promising :)
klaroline4everlove chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
just found and love this story...
21stseventeen chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
okay, nevermind, this is the one-shot i'm in love with.
it's flawless
hummelchen chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Fuck! That was just great! Perfect and belly tingling ;) Kudos for you!
SweetyK chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Very great this OS !
I Do Not Stumble For Thy chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
I am giggling like a maniac.
Perfect.
Cathar chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
You really get them, you know? This was beautiful.
dogisms chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
They are so perfect despite all the messed-up-ness of their relationship.
cafeanna chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
All very true very valid points and I love it! XD
ink-stained dreams chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
that's it. *chucks msword out the window*

this is beautifully done. you kept caroline in character, which I really appreciate, especially in this scenario. she's so angry and hurt, but that dash of hesitancy at the end - ugh perfect. this whole thing is perfect, and it tugs at my heartstrings. you write klaroline so deliciously; please never stop!
The Red Strings chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
It just comes all around in one full circle.

I believe you have presented Klaus very well as Elijah. His struggles to get Caroline to even notice him, to even talk to him as just simply him, the Original Hybrid, was well portrayed as well as his wants overpowering his distaste of being inside Tyler's body.

You captured Caroline's personality very well, her youth and desires as a teenage girl.

I really like this.

Hopefully, it won't take forever for her to realize that a small town life won't always be what she'd want.

Job well done.

-The Red Strings-
John-Bazil chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
very nice! and believable
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