This is unacceptable and I cried

Horribly depressing but I liked it.

I really liked this- heart-wrenching, but very good. Like others were saying you do need to pay attention to understand what's going on, but I had no problem and the writing style was one of my favorite parts!
It was really clever how everything played out- Kami essentially left Maka in the same awful circumstances that she was in. The only thing I didn't quite fully get was how Soul 'died'- I understood that his soul and body were dead and gone, but his scythe was still there? I'm assuming that Kami somehow killed him before the story began, right?
Again, very well done!

I actually don't want to fave this because it's too heartbreaking. I mean, my heart has literally broken into little pieces and I don't know how to fix it.

(Imma fave it anyway though, because it's well-written and feel-inducing stories earn faves).

Very good! really dark! i like when authors totally change my entire thought process on a certain character!

im a little confused about what happened at the end. Did she kill her mom or was that just a nightmare? or both? is soul dead or did she get a new partner or something?

thanks for the amazing story though

Brb gross sobbing

VERY good, it keeps you thinking the entire time. I cried. Fantastic job :)

That was sad. I wouldn't understand it if I skipped a sentence.

Very interesting take on Kami. I really do like your interpretation of her being a disappointed mother rather than the loving one most of the fandom depicts her as.

Whoa. That got me a little teary there. This story is incredibly intense and amazingly emotional - you do dark just as incredibly as you smexy. Phenomenal!

Sad story.

What happened at the end I'm kind of confused.

Anyways good job.

Sincerely The Sign Painter