Hello again! Yesterday I came across your Blindsided story and finished it that day. I am glad I found you because I love your writing and the ideas you come up with for Flashpoint. I am a huge Flashpoint fan alongside with you. I didn't mention this in Blindsided but Spike is also my favorite character. So when I read your work I always find myself giggling like crazy. I am actually a slow reader and so I literally spent the entire day reading your Breathe Me story. Such a lovely story! I loved every second of it! I hope you are still writing. I hope you haven't become tired of writing Flashpoint fanfiction? I am probably a little late coming to these stories three years later after the show has ended. But I hope you are still creating these wonderful stories. If you haven't gotten bored of them yet. Thank you so much again! I've instantly become your fan since I started to read Blindsided. I plan to be here reading more of your stories for now on! :)

will jules and sam be together in this story?

It's good! :)

I really enjoyed this story. I love when Spike scoops her up and carries her through the water, splashing. It's just such a Spike thing.

Awesome amazing spectacular job with this

The names awwwwww

The memorial candle for Lou so he could still be Spike's best man brought me to tears and then the inscriptions and vows wow wow wow

Bravo handling Lou's death so well

Damn that was good!

Maybe sam and jules and spike and adele should double date.

I like the sibling like relationship between spike and jules

My God, this is awesome. So nice of you to pick Spike, seems like he was the only one who didn't have much going on in his life (at least as part of the show). But you've changed that. I'll. have to say kudos.

Again, good mix of dialogue and description. Especially liked the details you gave of Adele's tiny apartment.

While I doubt there would actually be a 'professional follow-up' like the one you've got happening here, I can see how Team One would feel the need to keep an eye on 'the subject'. After all, they truly can't force her to see her family if she doesn't want to.

I liked Spike's apprehension and how he mentally berated himself; how he knew he'd never hear the end of it if the team found out.

Adele's struggles again rang true, making it easy to sympathize with her.

Great beginning. This chapter flowed really nicely, and I thought you incorporated the various lines of dialogue from the selected episodes seamlessly.

Adele's inner turmoil and anxieties rang true, and you made her into a very sympathetic character. I think many of us can relate to her personal and social problems, as well as the self-doubt. Good job making feel 'real'.

Moving on...

OMG this chapter was Intense hoping Adelle is ok cause it would be really hard on spike,the twins and everyone in general. You are an AMAZING writer and I LOVE this story. You should make a sam and jules love story where they have a baby too :)