This is so so so cute!

The reviews below mine pretty much say it all: a great oneshot, with perfect dialogue. You have the gift of saying a lot in just a few words. That is a rare talent.

Please, keep writing.

Awnnnnn! In love with perfect dialogue!

Add favs! *-*

PRETTY DAMN GOOD! But why only a oneshot ;(

Oh wow, this was a beautifully written piece. I tend to judge ff by the first couple of lines and yours had me hooked :) It was a bit confusing at first, not really knowing if Glimmer was alive, but in a good way, you know? XD and you've really got a knack for writing dialogue which, on this site, is actually quite uncommon.

And on top of that, you did such a good job bringing these minor characters to life. I feel like I kind of know them now. Fabulous work!