Intricately sweet Love how you made the weapon display affection!

That was interesting, I liked it. x3

A nice change of perspective and I LIKE it! Well written and original. This weapon has seen the destruction of Wonderland and the madness infecting all of the characters and Wonderland itself, so it's not all that strange that the vorpal blade itself also gained something of a conscience, something akin to the madness in Alice's mind. Together with her it slashed through enemies and the madness and it longs to be at her side where it belongs. In this story the vorpal blade is just a bit on the kind side, with how it wants to free Alice from the madness and guilt, but on the other hand it revels in the thought of plunging through the flesh of the Red Queen and it wants to destroy all which threaten Wonderland and Alice, and that gives the vorpal blade the crazy and mad vibe. It hopes to destroy once more, with Alice. Thank you for this short but interesting and inspiring story, good luck!

Nice story, I liked it

I love American McGee's Alice and I liked the second game Madness Returns but the latter felt like an expansion pack of the first game. Hopefully, game number three if they make one will be better. Oh well, till then bye

Very nice story, emotional considering the one speaking isn't usualy sentiant.

Interesting...and just a tad bit creepy...a wonderful birthday present for Ms. Liddell! Bravo to you! I give this tale 10/10.

Sincerely yours,

J.

Loved it~!

I...actually got a little teary-eyed, strange as it may be. Good job!