Reviews for When It Clears |
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Guest chapter 4 . 4/9 Arm & Hammer baking soda? |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/8 Tight story. |
ellie.atkins11 chapter 6 . 10/6/2016 It was a good story |
DragonPatronus88 chapter 6 . 5/11/2016 Really liked this story. Thanks for sharing! ;) |
Crystalzap chapter 6 . 5/8/2015 sweet |
TheDragon28 chapter 6 . 9/21/2014 That ending though! Oh my gosh! This played with my feels so much but was so gash darn sweet! I LOVED IT! THANK YOU! |
The Rambler chapter 6 . 12/11/2013 STEVE. WORSHIP HIM, PEOPLE. WORSHIP HIM. |
katelaina1717 chapter 6 . 11/6/2013 Awww so sweet, I can fully imagine Tony and Steve together they compliment each other - Tony makes Steve less serious with his playfullness and Steve bring stability to the chaos that is Tony. They make a great team plus with Tony Steve doesn't need to be the protector or strongest all the time, he can just be Steve just like Tony need not hold his mask up since Steve will see through it. |
EnchantedRealmsFiction chapter 5 . 4/6/2013 Just thought I'd point this out. I realize that this story's been here for a while . . . in the last chapter, you wrote that Cap had been frozen for fifty years. In this one, it was seventy. Just thought I'd let you know about the inconsistency. |
memelovescaps chapter 6 . 1/31/2013 Easily one of my all time favourite fics, THIS WAS AMAZING! Loved how you described Steve's illness, how Tony was worried to death for his super hero and especially the beginning and the end of the fic. "But sometimes, just sometimes, it was the other stuff, what came in the aftermath, that was also best part of being a hero…the best part of being alive." I loved this, because even though we, normal human beings, are not heroes, we also go through our own dramas, and sometimes the aftermath is the best part of it; and I think the reader can relate with that. A really good fic, can't wait to read more of you! :) |
ILiveBetweenTheLines chapter 6 . 12/27/2012 ok, this was totally worth a hour of my life that should have been spent asleep |
BatFlashAquaven11 chapter 6 . 11/21/2012 Love this! |
Rika100 chapter 6 . 10/13/2012 Wow! This is great, I really love the story. :) :) |
oopsabird chapter 6 . 9/27/2012 Bravo, bravo! Well done, well written! And in character, too! |
Journey Hates chapter 6 . 7/29/2012 Really Tony? You made a guy hit a squirrel with a golf ball? Really? This story was perfect. Right on the dot for all of the characters and pace. Amazing and awesome job! |