Interesting

Lovely story. Wish there was more.

muuuuch too short. Needs a sequel, definitely!

I really liked it. Cute and quirky and different. But definitely needs more :P

Very nicely done.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH H!
thank you I am really stressed due to moving and this just made me feel so much better.
THANK YOU
Aurora Kerns

That was such an amazing story. I really loved it :)

That was AMAZING! I really enjoyed reading that story. I like reading stories that go into detail for their sex scenes but you did a great job the way you wrote it. I don't know what else to say but some of the best stories I've ever read seem to take place on a train, why is that? What was your inspiration for this story?

Thanks for a great read. :)

what the universe conspired )

Holy shit. I think i just made you my god. I bow to thee for i am not worthy!

Sweet story

Aww, great story! D

This was just really, really lovely, all the way through.

This was really fun to read, a great story!

Oh wow. So sweet and tender. This was such a lovely read and I couldn't stop until I'd finished. (I only recognised Mr K when he started spouting riddles!)

It would be great if you could do a second chapter/sequel for it, possibly something with more of a focus on Arthur and his situation, like how we followed Merlin here, but it is wonderful as it.

Time to stalk your profile for other writings, me thinks :)

AWA x

This was so beautiful, I enjoyed it so much, it made my train drive that much more enjoyable. :)