I really think you should do something with this. There is potential for other chapters, maybe flashbacks? I really liked this btw :)

Once again I'm in love with one of your stories :')

Reading this story makes me wanna go clubbing in the hopes of finding me a man like Gaara. You made him so YUMMY!
I hope you write more Gaara and Hinata. Love them both soooo much! :)

i really loved this, although i do wish you could have described emi differently from a "mentally challenged dog"

Hi!

I've read most of your Gaara/Hinata stories, and I really enjoy them! Your writing style is much more developed than most of the other writers on this site, and your AU's are really genuinely unique stories. I hope you'll write more.

Also - is Hallelujah completed? It seems like it could go either way.

Anyway - thanks for writing what you do - it helps fuel my nerdy obsession!

I really like this! I like Hinata's personality, bold and not afraid to curse. It suits her in the fic. Hope you write more awesome fics! c:

Oh, i didn't realize it was a one-shot lol but nevertheless i loved it & i want more ㅜ.ㅜ

I LOVE this story. Please, update soon!

YOOO. I just saw on the summary that it said OOC bahhaahahhhaha.

Well my opinion on it having a modern feel that clicked and worked still stands teehee :D

Hmm! I really liked this! At times, the characters felt a little OOC due to some dialogue that I had a hard time imagining, butttttt what I really liked about your interpretation was that it had a very modern feel to it. The more I read the more it seemed to click, and the more it seemed to work and flow, so I liked it a lot.

Of course, I see that this was written back in 2012, so no big deal bahaha :D

There were some reallllyyy pretty lines that got my heart going YEAHHHH (the poetry major in me haha): I loveedd the paragraphs after the fuck buddies offer, where it summed up their relationships, especially the lines where you likened Gaara and being with him as breathing, natural and unconscious. LOVED IT YAS SUCH GORGEOUS LINES YAS. And also the few scenes after that were really beautifully written, in my opinion, especially with the dialogue, my favorite being the last two lines exchanged between them, short and sweet and poignant.

But yah! I really liked it! Plus, it was cool to see the jump from your writing skills here to Strength (:

its different to read a non-stuttering, shy, quiet hinata.

i like it! i like this hina too. she got sass D

loved it!

tis is VERY good!

i hope there is a sequel to this! i can imagine tis like them tv shows!

It's a very nice story...:)

Love it! And would certainly love to read more about them if you ever feel the need to add :-D